pretty, then brutal
by aterrell (May 09, 2008)
Hey, I wrote this thing and I think it sounds cool, but I need an outside opinion. I think it may be a little repetetive. It could be like a intro or something. Comment the tab and be as critical as possible.
This part is clean.
Then there could be like drums tapping the cymbals like 1,2,3,4 or something and folling with this part, which is distorted.
This part is clean.
E|---------------------------------------------------------|---------------------|
G|----------9----------------------------------------------|---------------------|
B|----9---9---9---9----------9----------------6------------|---------------------|
D|--7---7-------7------7---7---7---7----7---7---7---7------|-----------7---------|
A|-------------------7----7-------7----9---9-------9-------|----9----9---9---9---|
E|---------------------------------------------------------|-10---10------10-----|
repeat exept replace the bracketted piece at the end with this
|-------------------|
|-------------------|
|-------------------|
|-----------7(hold)-|
|----9----9---------|
|-10---10-----------|
Then there could be like drums tapping the cymbals like 1,2,3,4 or something and folling with this part, which is distorted.
E|--7h8h9---------------------7h8h9------------------7h8h9-----------------------------------------------------|
G|------------9-9-7--------------------9-9-7--------------------9-9-7------------------------------------------|
B|---------------------8h9---------------------8h9-----------------------8h9-----------------------------------|
D|-----------------------------7------------------------9---------------------------11--9--11-----11-11-11-11--|
A|-----------------------------7------------------------9---------------------------11--9--11-----11-11-11-11--|
E|-----------------------------5------------------------7----------------------------9--7---9-----9--9--9--9---|