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I feel like you could of brought the rhythm guitar up just a little bit in the beginning. I feel it's hard to find that initial groove that I always look for in a song, as it's masked behind so many other instruments and effects.
Other than that, it's an ok song. The only thing that completely stuck out to me was the horn melody that is played I guess before/after the chorus - Probably should of tried to implement this melodic idea in your lyrics, or in your solo, to really get that kind of a groove going.
Other than that... very professional composition and great work!
"Viva Mexico!" This sentence in your song pretty well describes the recent electure of the new Miss Universe (She is from mexico)
The song is quite good, altough i get the impression that you were going to strongly for a popsong, even in the german radio this song would sound really pop-like. But I have to be quiet, i could never do anything like this. Besides that, the solo is really great! Some nice little lines in there.
Haha you got the line man! Also,2010 is the year we "celebrate"(because we ain't got nothing to celebrate...this country sucks...) 200 years of our independence,and there is this big party feeling and stuff like that that the goverment wants to sell to us,and soooo,more mexican power = more chances of winining! Haha
Yes, i like my g a y pop band,in fact i want to record more songs with them...hopefully in a near future you will listen a topanga EP!
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