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DarkRiff  
8 Jun 2010 19:08 | Quote
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I wrote all the parts of this song and played guitar and sang.
BodomBeachTerror  
8 Jun 2010 19:52 | Quote
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that keyboardist is mad! or was it a computer? i really loved the solo, it sounded spot on as far as accuracy and timing to me. you really should get a band and start doing gigs cause you rock! youre what, 15? sounds like someone who's been PLAYING for 15 years!

PS I loved that harmonized part ^_^
DarkRiff  
8 Jun 2010 20:23 | Quote
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Wow, thanks man. and yes the keyboards were a computer, but I wrote the notes for it.
Guitarslinger124  
8 Jun 2010 23:34 | Quote
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That all sounded really great dude. The beginning reminded me of Led Zeppelin. It was nice. A couple things I think you could have done better though:
-Lower the volume on the bass, or add some reverb so it fills up its space without spill over.
-During that last guitar solo (which was very good by the way) you might want to think about adding a rhythm guitar. The mix seemed weak with just the drums and bass in the background.

All in all, I think you did a terrific job. Keep it up.

Rock on!
tinyskateboard  
9 Jun 2010 13:11 | Quote
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Nice job. I like how the solo is like a whole different part of the song like a metal epic. Maybe if you came back to your original style riff at the end it would have more of a defined ending?.
AlexB  
9 Jun 2010 15:40 | Quote
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Sound nice man,you have improved,still needs work tho,not in the mix/recording (for now..) but in the composition,sounds nice but im sure it can be better,make a better arrangement...

But Deff i hear improvement,congrats


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