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Mezzie  
4 Jul 2012 14:32 | Quote
Joined: 01 Aug 2010
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Hey guys, this is a new song i wrote and i would love your feedback on it :) Heres the lyrics



My head couldn't explain how my heart felt that night
All I could give you were words
When all I wanted to do was hold you tight, and never let go

I don't think you know how much I care
How much I wanted to be there
Just telling you is never enough
And showing you, well let's just say I'd still only be halfway there.

Those sweet lips
That spilt such sour words
I didn't understand at first
All i knew was that you needed to be heard

And those warm brown eyes
I didn't know they had so much to hide
I just knew they were beautiful
I didn't know how much they cried

But We seem to forget during the day
It's like the sun soaks up the pain
But At night we lie awake
Just Waiting for the sun to save us again, and again..
DanielM  
5 Jul 2012 02:20 | Quote
Joined: 11 Apr 2011
United Kingdom
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Wow that was really good I liked it.
btimm  
5 Jul 2012 14:48 | Quote
Joined: 14 Dec 2009
United States
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Very well done dude, you have some serious talent. I especially like this line:

Just telling you is never enough
And showing you, well let's just say I'd still only be halfway there.

Well done sir!
Aymen  
5 Jul 2012 16:36 | Quote
Joined: 16 May 2012
Morocco
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"This video is a response to Justin Bieber - Boyfriend"
Man I just lost faith in you :(
Mezzie  
5 Jul 2012 17:11 | Quote
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Canada
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Thanks guy I'm really glad you liked it :)
And aymen maybe I don't understand the video response thing lol. I made a response to that video because it had a lot of views, maybe a bad idea? Lol
Aymen  
5 Jul 2012 17:23 | Quote
Joined: 16 May 2012
Morocco
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Yea a really bad one :o you could choose any video besides that one :(
Mezzie  
5 Jul 2012 17:27 | Quote
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Canada
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Haha okay, thanks for the tip. Does that mean I have your faith again? ;)
Aymen  
5 Jul 2012 17:31 | Quote
Joined: 16 May 2012
Morocco
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Hell yea :D
Mezzie  
5 Jul 2012 18:05 | Quote
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Canada
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Hahaha awesome! :D So what did you think of the song?
tinyskateboard  
6 Jul 2012 15:03 | Quote
Joined: 28 Apr 2010
United States
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That is so much better then a cover. I love it. For a little more of a hook, maybe revisit "Just Waiting for the sun to save us again, and again.." more often.


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