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Cibola

Songwriting
baseballer02  
19 Jun 2011 21:28 | Quote
Joined: 27 Dec 2009
United States
Karma: 2
This one is called ďCibolaĒ. I wrote it in about 20 effortless minutes, tell me if I should have spent more time on it haha!

Verse 1&2:
She dreams in colors
That donít exist
She screams aloud sometimes,
Always without sound

Tide goes in, Tide goes out.
Part of life is doubt

Pre-chorus:
No one knows,
My inner-most thoughts
No one knows,
These words that I
Jot down.

Chorus:
This is music, in high def.
Revealing every thought, that ever snuck in to my head
So, now itís begun
Girl, let me in, and weíll sing into the sun!

Verse 3&4:
Every word she speaks
Sparks a war
Every breath she takes
Forms a Hurricane

Ebb and flow, Earth and Fire,
You have my word, but Iím a liar.

(Pre-chorus)
(Chorus)

Verse 5&6:
Wherever she points,
A miracle occurs
Wherever she stands,
A monument is built.

Life and Death, Black and White,
A shade of gray to F**k with my life

(Pre-chorus)
(Chorus)

Bridge:
Iíve heard the rumors!
Iíve believed Ďem all!
Iíve heard the rumors!
Iíve believed Ďem all!
Iíve heard the rumors!
Iíve believed Ďem all!
Come to Cibola,
Answer the call!

Outro Chorus:
Like a fool, I believed them all,
All the thoughts that snuck into my head.
So, now itís begun.
Girl, let me in, and weíll sing into the sun!
This is music, in high def.
Revealing every thought, that ever snuck in to my head
So, now itís begun
Girl, let me in, and weíll sing into the sun!



tinyskateboard  
19 Jun 2011 23:56 | Quote
Joined: 28 Apr 2010
United States
Karma: 11
so i don't like the term 'high def' cause it feels too rooted in today, and might feel dated in a couple of years.

it looks great to me, i think you have a natural approachable writing style and can write for a living.

what's cibola?
baseballer02  
20 Jun 2011 07:37 | Quote
Joined: 27 Dec 2009
United States
Karma: 2
Thanks man, I appreciate it! I have an instrumental recording of this, but it was done on a crummy guitar and a string broke during, so I'm not sure if I wanna upload it:/

Cibola is the most well known of the legendary Seven Cities of Gold


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