The Hiding Place - Original

Here's another song I wrote recently



"When you look up at the stars
I can see it in your eyes
You're scared of the morning like a vampire
But its okay to cry
when the clock strikes midnight
you know a new day has arrived

Past the rolling hills
under the stairs
A girl I know is curled up down there
When you can't hold this weight
Its never to late
To come out from your hiding place

When you're far from the moon
and far from the stars
Isolation pushes you so hard
When you don't know where you are
and can't find your way
There's a light in this cave someplace."

Very nice.

Brilliant. your consentration on righthand is real good even with singing, quite long song and only few really minor fails makes it wonderful shot m8. Cheers, two thumbs up!

Emp

its allright but like the other one alot more

BBT this is another cool song. I like your style of writing.

bb your songs are melancholy,but unique,good job.

thanks men, tomorrow I am playing a Japan relief concert with some local talent, its gonna be sweet

Very nice man! i can only tell to work on your timing and you're there!

THanks! I should start playing with a click track I think

It sounds great, you sound like you're throwing away the singing a little tho'..like your not totally committed.

Great song.