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The Hiding Place - Original

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26 Apr 2011 12:30 | Quote
Joined: 27 May 2008
Lessons: 2
Licks: 1
Karma: 25
Here's another song I wrote recently

"When you look up at the stars
I can see it in your eyes
You're scared of the morning like a vampire
But its okay to cry
when the clock strikes midnight
you know a new day has arrived

Past the rolling hills
under the stairs
A girl I know is curled up down there
When you can't hold this weight
Its never to late
To come out from your hiding place

When you're far from the moon
and far from the stars
Isolation pushes you so hard
When you don't know where you are
and can't find your way
There's a light in this cave someplace."
26 Apr 2011 17:43 | Quote
Joined: 05 Jun 2010
Karma: 22
Very nice.
26 Apr 2011 17:48 | Quote
Joined: 23 Jun 2008
Lessons: 4
Karma: 35
Brilliant. your consentration on righthand is real good even with singing, quite long song and only few really minor fails makes it wonderful shot m8. Cheers, two thumbs up!

26 Apr 2011 18:15 | Quote
Joined: 08 Dec 2007
United States
Karma: 9
its allright but like the other one alot more
26 Apr 2011 19:18 | Quote
Joined: 10 Jul 2010
United States
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BBT this is another cool song. I like your style of writing.
26 Apr 2011 19:20 | Quote
Joined: 03 Sep 2010
United States
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Karma: 22
bb your songs are melancholy,but unique,good job.
26 Apr 2011 22:18 | Quote
Joined: 27 May 2008
Lessons: 2
Licks: 1
Karma: 25
thanks men, tomorrow I am playing a Japan relief concert with some local talent, its gonna be sweet
26 Apr 2011 23:00 | Quote
Joined: 13 Jul 2009
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Karma: 23
Very nice man! i can only tell to work on your timing and you're there!
27 Apr 2011 00:06 | Quote
Joined: 27 May 2008
Lessons: 2
Licks: 1
Karma: 25
THanks! I should start playing with a click track I think
27 Apr 2011 00:35 | Quote
Joined: 28 Apr 2010
United States
Karma: 11
It sounds great, you sound like you're throwing away the singing a little tho' your not totally committed.

Great song.

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