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Wrote Some More

Songwriting
GreenHorn  
23 Dec 2010 18:56 | Quote
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Hay I know I'm not on much and sorry about that, but did some songwriting and seeing if there okay or not.
maybe they could give you some ideas on songwriting too.
Thanks! :D

OH! P.S.
Merry Christmas Everyone! =3


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~(Fallen Angel)~
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Little angel, I'm missing you and I'm not alright to smile.
Nothing seems to matter when I'm not beside you...
There was a time when I wasn't sure,
but I've come to realize, that you are in my heart now...
My little angel, your all I think about.

Sad woman, don't you cry, everything will be alright.
All you are is just a fallen angel.
Sad love, take it slow, We'll make it through this.
All you are is just a fallen angel.

Little Angel...

When I look inside your eyes,
I can see a little light of hope.
But it's cold with a shadow of fear of a broken heart,
but Angel of mine,
don't you know when I hold you, I feel the same?

Sad sugar, don't you break, I'm here to hold you tight,
All you are is just a little angel.
Sad baby, It'll take some time, but everything will be just fine...
All you are is just a little angel.

Fallen Angel..

I know you like walking the streets at night,
just trying to work it out.
With fears deep inside and the shadows that remain..
And I know you can't love me when it's just nothing more then pain.
but never mind the darkness, angel. We can still find away.
Because your my candle in the cold dark winters night...

Sad angel, Don't you cry tonight, please remember that I never lied,
and my angel, Don't give up, because please remember how I felt inside,

With all the passing days and all the seasons of the year,
your the only thing I seem to care.
So please don't cry angel, because I still love you.
And when you need someone beside you, remember that I'm here for you...

Little Angel
yeah~

Fallen Angel
yeah~

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~(This Holy Day)~
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So tell me on this day... how you feel,
To believe in things we can never see?
Holding are love to keep it disguised.
And all of our love we keep down inside...

For now I see the answering to the pray I have ever prayed!!
I get to hold my love, this holy day!

So tell me if gave you my love, will you be kind?
Not just for a day, but for ever day and ever other day after?
or is it our love only in our minds,
but why do I feel so much pain when you have gone away!!

BUT now I see it this love is different!
It's changed some how!?
and now your love is here to stay!!!

I found my love, ever thing doesn't seem the same
and I write this song this night for ever thing that has changed,
because everything is as it should be.

I have my love,
I have the perfect family,
I have my wish,
I have the chance to see everything that my heart could be!

When I seen her eyes, I knew the first thing I knew,
that there is no other one, that's made like you.
YOU stay close when even I'm far away!

When I'm in the darkest night, it always you were the stuff
that help me get through these painful days!
I get to hold my love, this holy day!

I get to hold my
I get to hold my
I get to hold my
I get to hold my love, this holy day!

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~(The First In Line)~
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I wake up to turn on the news,
them speaking of the coming fight, saying
"We most fight for freedom,
we'll fight without a fear, we're hope without a tear."
We are going......To WAR!

We're off to war, we may never come home,
but our sacrifice well save the rich for another life time.
We were bore to the fight, we were met to sacrifice
and the only way out is to a open cell or a quick shot to the head.

You'll know for the first time,
if you're poor your the first in line!

The first in line.

They have their eyes on the east,
they call them the angel of the beast.
But the truth is under the sand,
it dose not matter if it's good or bad.

We could search for the truth,
But we'll die upon the truth!
we'll fight without a fear, We're hope without a tear


You'll know for the first time,
if you're poor your the first in line!

The first in line.

We're off to war, we may never, never, never come home,
but our sacrifice well save the rich for another life time!
Why should they go out and fight,
when they can leave the battle to the poor?!

You'll know for the first time,
if you're poor your the first in line!

If you're rich.
If you're rich...
If you're rich, your the last in line!

You'll know for the first time,
if you're poor your the first in line!
MoshZilla1016  
23 Dec 2010 19:25 | Quote
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Glad to see you're at it again:) This is good. I especially like first in line.
EMB5490  
23 Dec 2010 19:36 | Quote
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hey i like it, it sounds like song lyrics? (i write more poetry and then change them slightly to phrase for the song...)

Those are really good though, id love to hear it to a track

happy christmahanukwanzakah
nullnaught  
26 Dec 2010 21:28 | Quote
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I like the first one best.
GreenHorn  
28 Dec 2010 16:10 | Quote
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@MoshZilla
Thanks ^^
I really like "First In Line" as well,
but is it just me that it seem it could have a little more in it? :/

@EMB5490
Thank you and I agree I would like to hear them a track or something too, but sady I can't play anything, but if anybody would like to make some music behide them, that fine with me. I would to hear them ^^

@nullnaught
Yes, "Fallen Angel" Took a long time to write and I'm just so happy how it came out and thank too! :D
EMB5490  
29 Dec 2010 20:43 | Quote
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do you have a melody or rythm on the lyrics?
MoshZilla1016  
29 Dec 2010 21:49 | Quote
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I think First In Line seems complete. The point is well stated from a couple of views but this is your creation so go with what you feel man. It would make a great song.
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