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Goodbye - original lyrics

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BodomBeachTerror  
6 Sep 2010 03:01 | Quote
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I thought I'd post these lyrics I just finished, all in one sitting. Because i, or anyone else really havnt posted any new lyrics. so yeah

"Goodbye, Goodbye, Goodbye
All I want to say is Goodbye
Now that you're gone,
It won't be so long
Until we can say hello again.

Goodbye, Goodbye, Goodbye.
I just want to say goodbye.
I wish you luck in this life
I'll think of you every night
And all the memories we've had

So long, So long, So long.
All I want to say is so long
Now that you're moving on
I wrote you this song
And I mean every word it says

Goodbye, Goodbye, Goodbye.
All I can say is goodbye.
You're such an awesome friend
I wish it would never end
But I guess there's always a time for goodbyes
And tonight just feels like that time."
GreenHorn  
6 Sep 2010 03:06 | Quote
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Cool~~~ I love writing and that was really good. :D
heres one of mine.

"You are the Moon"

In my world, You are the moon.. the only warmth I feel.
your light, lights up a path through the dark bitterness,
I'm able to follow and find myself feeling less alone.
I stop along the road-
I want to hold you, but when I reach up you're far from where I am
and I slowly lose the well to try.
then I see the clouds slowly block out your light,
I start to feel cold and scared of being alone...
I find my self wanting you and needing you,
because you are all is right in the night.
As I start to run to you and reach out to you,
but it seems I can never get to you...
You are my one wish in life, you are the moon,
with your light which guides me from the cold dark night...
You warm me when I'm cold with your light and your always there when I look up to you.
Many don't understand you, many never care for you and many are afraid of you,
But I love you for what you are and if I can never reach out to you, then I will never forget you.
I will always look into the night sky and know that you are there with your beautiful bright light.
One day I wish to hold you, protect you and love you...

I wish for you to be my moon.
Admiral  
6 Sep 2010 06:22 | Quote
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Cool lyrics! Both of you!
Duff  
6 Sep 2010 16:19 | Quote
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Nice lyrics

Here are mine's :


Kidís haze , mothers save




Mother can I walk outside?
No son , cause you are to young

Mother can I watch TV?
No son youíre mind itís to weak

Mother can I stay out late?
No son you are to afraid

Mother why canít I be free?
Well son you are my kid

Mother why canít I be a normal boy
Well son you ainít that old

Mother can I go out and play?
No son you have to pray
But mother what should I pray
Pray something that involves me
Mother but I donít know no prayer
Well son you have to say somethingÖ
ďGod oh mighty God
In my mom I really trust (good son)
Sheís the one that keeps me safe
I donít have no word Iím just a slave (excellent son)
My mom really ***ing cares!Ē (what?!)

Hey Son ! why did you say ***?
Well mom , I think it felt right

The son you are grounded for a week
With no computer of TV!
Only books to read
In this life you ainít free


You were born by me , and die near me
This is my philosophy
And if you have something to say
Then donít say
Causeí youíll be grounded once again

(solo)

But mother when you pass away?
What son?!
What will happen then?
Well Ö you think youíll be free?
Haha you are thinking bull**
Cause when I die , Iíll watch over you
Every mistake that you make , Iíll hunt you
And because you said those ugly things
You are grounded for another week

(solo)

But mom I hate you!
Mom I wanna kill you!
When Iíll turn 18Ö
Iíll freaking leaveÖ
Iíll do what I shouldíve done at 16
Party , drink , those kinda of things
Cause now Iím just a kid
Because the way you put over your wings
I know you wanna keep me warm
But I got my mind and words
So you ainít my boss
Iím not youíre slave , Iím not a joke
I know that you that you didnít won the war
So thatís why over my person I have control
I donít care if you live me alone
Iíll build o house out of stone
And live my life like I should
This is the way that it goes


It's about a kids mom wo won't let him be free .. ( those are my neighbours ) >:)
JazzMaverick  
6 Sep 2010 18:19 | Quote
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@ Duff,

You're a teenager, sadly you don't know any better. But your mom works hard to help you every day. I don't like your lyrics at all... show some damn respect to her. Leave when you're 18 and then you'll realise how hard life is and maybe then you'll understand why she does what she does.

@ BBT & GreenHorn

Your lyrics are awesome :)
MoshZilla1016  
6 Sep 2010 18:29 | Quote
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JazzMaverick says:
You're a teenager, sadly you don't know any better. But your mom works hard to help you every day. I don't like your lyrics at all... show some damn respect to her. Leave when you're 18 and then you'll realise how hard life is and maybe then you'll understand why she does what she does.


+1
GreenHorn  
6 Sep 2010 20:59 | Quote
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@Jazzy, Admiral and Duff
Thank you very much. :D

if it's okay I'll post some more of my work. :)

"Heart of cold fire"
I've been crawling in the dark, searching for a light.
Everytime I saw the light it left me in the dark.
Then the day came when I learned to make my own light.
Now my light twinkles alone in the dark with a shadow all around it,
to keep my light from burning out I had to set it to a blazing flame.
With a blazing heart I was left with a never ending light,
All I saw with the light was a empty space with it never to be ending,
but with a flaming light, everyother got buried from it...
Not realizing my flame was a wall from all others.
Now left alone with a heart to hot to touch.
Siting a alone with the bright light, then someone came with a heart of ice,
she walk up to me and sat next to me.
She put out her hand and asked me to warm her heart for her.
We held hands and then my blazing flame and her stone of ice
was now a beautiful twinkle in the dark and then we saw the many twinkles in the empty space....

(part 2)
Hearing whispering in the wind, voices at my heart,
Hurting me, making me and trying to break me,
to change and mould me into someone I don't know...
To stop all the pain and shut out the voices,
I had to seal my heart into the strength of ice.
Now no one could hurt me or speak to me, I was left in a dark round sheet of ice.
Slowly I turn to stone, feeling nothing and feeling nothing for others.
Forgetting what it is to care and then I saw a bright light, that melted a hole in my ice.
Feeling it's warmth, I left my ice to grow closer to it.
Then I saw a young man siting at a blazing flame.
I sat next to him feeling his lovely flame,
I asked if he would take my hand and warm my heart.
He took my hand, it melt the ice and cooled the blaze.
and then I saw a beautiful twinkle between us.
and then we saw the many twinkles in the empty space....
btimm  
6 Sep 2010 22:39 | Quote
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Duff says:
Iíll do what I shouldíve done at 16
Party , drink , those kinda of things


You can't be serious. You are mad that your mom won't let you do irresponsible things that will lead to horrible decisions? Really?! Hrmmmm...
nullnaught  
6 Sep 2010 23:01 | Quote
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In my opinion your all being too hard on Duff. Dont think that means i agree with his song. I think he has a right to write about ANYTHING he wants. He just choosed something a lot of people will disagree with.


GreenHorn  
6 Sep 2010 23:07 | Quote
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lol, I was just about post the same thing.
duff it's a good work of art to those who know the same pain..
Not every art is going to be look at the same way.
You work on it and put your heart into it and that's all that matters. :)
Duff  
7 Sep 2010 02:52 | Quote
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Once again those lyrics aren't about my mom or my family .... with all respect my family i think it's a very closed one .. those lyrics are about another mom which doesn't give his son any freedom ...
And about PArty , drink at 16 ... here in ROmania you can drink and party every time you want :D
Duff  
7 Sep 2010 02:55 | Quote
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And I think jazzmaverick has something with me .... a few words stop *ing around with me ... I don't have no problems really but sometimes you make me very angry ... cheers :)
Duff  
7 Sep 2010 10:24 | Quote
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Here are some lyrics that aren't that sad :D

Found a Hearth



I.
One day a girl knocked at my door
She asked me if I saw her hearth on my kitchen floor
I didnít know what was going on Ö
So I asked her if itís real or itís a joke
ďNo itís for real I lost my hearth today
When I was running ď thatís what she said
And bagged me to help her because if I do
Sheíll love me until weíre both screwed


II.

I started searching for that girls hearth
And the day transformed in night
She invited me to help her next time
But on that night she never escaped my mind
Oh pretty girl , what will you do?
When I find your hearth and some flowers with her too
Oh pretty girl I donít have all day
Letís make love now and find your hearth next day


III.

Next day I went to her and she was playing her guitar
I said ďOh yeah! I found your hearthĒ
And she hugged me give me a tender kiss
There is a room letís go play like kids
After that she played me the guitar
Oh man she rocked! She played me all night
When I went home I picked up my guitar
And started playing what she played all night Ö watch out!!!


For those who think that I write only sad stuff :))

JazzMaverick  
7 Sep 2010 10:27 | Quote
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I haven't got anything against YOU as a person, I actually think you're pretty cool and you have interesting topics on this forum... but your lyrics are just plain offensive.

For you to even post those lyrics about your mom or anyone else's mom means you support them!

I shouldn't even have to explain it to you...

If you post lyrics online expect both compliments AND insults!

How else are you going to improve as a musician?

Now stop PMing me trying to tell me how much of a b!tch I am and grow up.


Sorry BBT, I don't mean to ruin another one of your posts, but I needed to get that off of my chest.


@Duff, these last lyrics are good though. I wouldn't mind hearing those with music behind them.
Duff  
7 Sep 2010 10:35 | Quote
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I think those are great lyrics ... because they came from my hearth .... :D ... those lyrics have a story :D ... I'll tell you that later ... because I have to go to a Party!!!!!!!!!!! \m/ :))
case211  
7 Sep 2010 10:55 | Quote
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I liked the last song Duff ;)

With some music rolling with them it could be pretty cool.
Duff  
7 Sep 2010 11:01 | Quote
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To those last lyrics I have a pretty good Instrumental :D .. I's a bluesy one :D .. I'll post it to the guitar licks page .. but it's trade mark :D
BodomBeachTerror  
7 Sep 2010 12:42 | Quote
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JazzMaverick says:
Sorry BBT, I don't mean to ruin another one of your posts, but I needed to get that off of my chest.


haha I'm getting used to it =p
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