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Ozzfan486  
21 Apr 2010 17:46 | Quote
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You wonder why it's so hard
It's your point of view
You feed on the sadness
And dwell on the truth
You never expect it-
When it comes back to you
You'd have never expected me-
To know you more than you

Now it's all over
You won't let it go
Can't say I'm surprised
Because it's you that I know
Keep tightening the noose
It just goes to show
You'll blame us all but yourself
And act like it's us who don't know

According to you
I'm the one who's wrong
I rely upon logic and fact-
And am deceitful and wrong
You deserve the pity
And I deserve to die
So you childishly play games
And sit there and cry



This was very spur-of-the-moment and somewhat derived from a very bad period I'm going through, so don't take it to seriously. I don't expect much feedback, but it is welcome.

If you read it, thanks,

Jake
Phip  
21 Apr 2010 18:19 | Quote
Joined: 23 Dec 2007
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Ozzy!
Intense.....and i like the "attitude" of these lyrics. It's angry and I like that. Don't take no crap from anyone Ozzy! Keep this on file and start working on some music for it. Then get these lyrics to "fit" the music. With a little editing and patience it could be a "keeper"
Phip
Ozzfan486  
21 Apr 2010 19:33 | Quote
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Thanks dude. I'll try to work on it sometime, but right now it was just sort of something to vent with and I figured I might as well post since I haven't put up lyrics in a while.
adelaideguitar  
28 Apr 2010 09:48 | Quote
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nice.
Ozzfan486  
28 Apr 2010 14:55 | Quote
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Thanks man. (:


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