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New Song - Diamonds

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baseballer02  
23 Mar 2010 17:30 | Quote
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A new song I wrote called "Diamonds". Please comment thanks!


One Thousand Failures,
One Thousand Falls,
One Thousand Failed Attempts in all.

Piece by piece,
I'll piece us back together.
Piece by piece I'll paint this picture.


All these songs left undone,
All these rhymes yet unsung.
As I flip through this notebook of unfortunate songs,
all forgotten and forgettable.
Yet one will make up for my failures,
that run so deep.

Maybe you're right.
Maybe I'm wrong.
Facing these doubts of mine, one million men strong.

Who Am I?
And who put me here?
Alone and fragile with all of my fears.


All these songs left undone.
All these rhymes yet unsung.
As I flip though this notebook of unfortunate songs,
Mostly forgotten and forgettable.
But every now and then,
You'll find a diamond,
and cash it in...


I've wasted
All this time.
Searching for diamonds
far and wide.

And I've wasted
All my life.
Thinking these diamonds
would save me,
would save me,
could save me,
These diamonds can't save me.


All these songs left undone.
All these rhymes yet unsung.
A chorus of lies is my favorite song...

All these songs left undone.
All these rhymes yet unsung.
As I flip through this notebook of stupid songs,
Mostly forgotten and forgettable.
Yet now I'm hoping with paper and pen,
That I'll find the words.
These diamonds that I selfishly cash in...
I'll cash in...

Now I'm poor...
I want more...
These diamonds...
satisfy...
gratify...
...and destroy.
johnnysixstring  
25 Mar 2010 02:03 | Quote
Joined: 21 Mar 2010
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that was great it was like poetry


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