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Oh this hurricane - song I wrote

Songwriting
baseballer02  
13 Jan 2010 19:21 | Quote
Joined: 27 Dec 2009
United States
Karma: 2
Oh, Where is the eye,
To this storm,
Hurled at us like,
A thousand lightning bolts?

Oh, Under this war torn sky,
I see a refugee,
I see a thousand lives,
Begging on their knees!

Oh, Oh Oh this hurricane,
Much more than I can take.
Soon I will break.
Oh oh this hurricane!

Oh, broken and scarred,
here come the empty men,
Who've lived a thousand lives,
And not seen one day!

Oh, Oh Oh this hurricane,
Much more than I can take.
Soon I will break.
Oh oh this hurricane!

Oh, Oh Oh this hurricane,
Much more than I can take.
Soon I will break.
Oh oh this hurricane!

Oh, the sun hides behind
Another dying sky,
With a thousand clouds,
that blot out our dreams!

Oh, Oh Oh this hurricane,
Much more than I can take.
Soon I will break.
Oh oh this hurricane!

Oh, Oh Oh this hurricane,
Much more than I can take.
Soon I will break.
Oh oh this hurricane!

Oh,
Oh Oh this hurricane (X8)


Any suggestions/comments/ criticism?
Musical_Magic  
13 Jan 2010 21:04 | Quote
Joined: 29 May 2008
United States
Karma
Looks good, Im not skilled at this kinda stuff so hopefuly someone else can give you a pointer,

What kinda of music is it? Metal? Rock? Jazz?
baseballer02  
14 Jan 2010 20:00 | Quote
Joined: 27 Dec 2009
United States
Karma: 2
Its rock-ish.... its very switchfoot sounding for a comparison
carlsnow  
15 Jan 2010 16:02 | Quote
Joined: 29 Apr 2009
United States
Lessons: 2
Karma: 23
baseballer02 says:
here come the empty men,
Who've lived a thousand lives,
And not seen one day


Nice line!!

RAWK!
Cs



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