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an attempt at more formal writing

Songwriting
BodomBeachTerror  
21 Nov 2009 14:57 | Quote
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a random attempt at a Sonnet

"Abigail, Abigail what have you done?
you once were so pure and so innocent
you sold yourself and ran off with someone
you just caught yourself up in the moment

'Lover, O lover', Abigail cried
'Wasnt it as true for you as it to me?
Lover, oh lover, i wrote you a lullaby
But i guess we were just not meant to be'

Lover, Oh Lover,' he cried from the stake
'Im sorry i left you, But please dont cry
Lover, Oh lover i didnt mean to forsake
I just wish i could have told you good bye

If there was anything that I could do
I would say that my love for you is true'"

dorky, i know
RelaxedDude  
21 Nov 2009 17:37 | Quote
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This is really good bro, much better than something I could write at the moment

Plus it actually really captures my feelings right now =/
BodomBeachTerror  
25 Nov 2009 21:03 | Quote
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