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Boy in his Room

Songwriting
BodomBeachTerror  
23 Oct 2009 19:52 | Quote
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Theres a boy in his room
Watching the clock cuz theres nothing to do
Theres a boy in his room
rollin a dice to see if he gets 2
Theres a boy in his room
drawing his thoughts out on the wall
Theres a boy in his room
whos wondering what he can do

*badabababa*

Theres a girl on the swing
just waiting for the bell to ring
Theres a girl on the swing
thinking of something else to sing
Theres a girl on the swing
just sitting all alone
Theres a girl on the swing
just wanting someones hand to hold

*badabababa*

a song i pumped out in about 15 minutes
Evan  
23 Oct 2009 20:00 | Quote
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Seems like you're just trying to rhyme.
fender_bender  
23 Oct 2009 20:05 | Quote
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What did you pump this out of?
BodomBeachTerror  
23 Oct 2009 20:06 | Quote
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ah idk. my butt?
apollos  
23 Oct 2009 20:56 | Quote
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el oh el
BodomBeachTerror  
24 Oct 2009 01:22 | Quote
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ah frick i forgot the melody
sev121993  
26 Oct 2009 19:39 | Quote
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Kinda makes me think of giant fish... Weird.
fender_bender  
28 Oct 2009 14:04 | Quote
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The melody? Have you seen the movie Elf with Will Ferrel? How he sings to his dad is the melody I hear for this. I have no idea why.

@Sev
what in the world, man.
BodomBeachTerror  
28 Oct 2009 14:57 | Quote
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no i havnt, but i found my melody again

anyways, 8 posts, 1 actual comment
Phip  
28 Oct 2009 15:08 | Quote
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Ok, I'll just take a shot at this one.....
Maybe you should give her a call?
With the right melody it has potential. so get to work and finish it and let's hear it BBT
Phip
Heather  
28 Oct 2009 16:19 | Quote
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Ah it's not something you pumped out your butt! You're so negative BBT! :P

I agree with Phip, I believe you could make it into something. I get random ideas in my head,I think they're great at the time. Then, later on I look at what I scribbled down from my head as fast as I could and I think 'What the? Was I binge drinking when I did this?' (that means those ideas I had were waaay worse then what you did here!)

But then I settle down when I have the time and edit them. Make them make sense, and soon a flow as the words develop and a melody come into my head. And I don't think the same as my original thought when I read them again. Just give them a little edit, it'll come naturally after a bit and become something great.
BodomBeachTerror  
29 Oct 2009 12:08 | Quote
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thanks guys, ill try to edit it a bit

and this is totally not the type of music you would expect from me from my past work

and phip im not gonna call her, i dont think shes very fond of me =p
Evan  
29 Oct 2009 14:43 | Quote
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An alternative way to see it

Theres a boy in his room
Listening to the tic toc cuz theres no time for the viewing of the clock
Theres a boy in his room
Rolling a die to impossibly catch a snake by the eyes.
Theres a boy in his room
Splattering his thoughts upon the wall
Theres a boy in his room
Pondering what he can, but ultimately won't, do.

*badabababa*

Theres a girl on the swing
Just waiting for the bell to yawn.
Theres a girl on the swing
Picturing something that can't be drawn.
Theres a girl on the swing
Just sitting, accomanied by her, and herself.
Theres a girl on the swing
just wanting to reach the hand of the man in the book she put back on the shelf

*badabababa*

idk, I'm just bored.


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