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J05H  
17 Aug 2009 22:06 | Quote
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new one

things are'nt as they seem to be
peice together all these lies
help me find the pointless truth
losing hope from time to time

reality lies in the hands
of vulgar and obscene
sew your eyes shut one by one
this world must not be seen

I've heard the voices
of the voice-less
ive paid the prices
now make it priceless!

[wat should go next
i want to hear your
opinion just for $hitz n' gigglez]
case211  
17 Aug 2009 22:19 | Quote
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Mastercard lol
J05H  
18 Aug 2009 08:06 | Quote
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but seriously
case211  
18 Aug 2009 08:14 | Quote
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I'm not much of a lyricist, I can't write lyrics that rhyme nor make sense.
Afro_Raven  
18 Aug 2009 08:42 | Quote
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I've heard the voices
of the voice-less
ive paid the prices
now make it priceless!

Next verse:

Dance then, wherever you may be,
"I am the lord of the dance" said he,
"And I'll lead you all, wherever you may be,
And I'll lead you all in the dance" said he...

How about that - I'd say it follows on pretty well?

Afro
J05H  
18 Aug 2009 20:23 | Quote
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hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm interesting
AlexB  
18 Aug 2009 22:15 | Quote
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@Afro : HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!
Nutter166  
19 Aug 2009 14:55 | Quote
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...Question why does that sound a hell of a lot like a Rage Against The Machine Song?
J05H  
19 Aug 2009 17:42 | Quote
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i woodnt know cuz i dont listen to them
Phip  
19 Aug 2009 19:02 | Quote
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Ok my turn.....
bop bob aloo bop a whop bam boom!
(drum roll please)

I've heard the voices
of the voice-less
ive paid the prices
now make it priceless!

put it on account
and i'll pay you back
on the day your.....(pause)
promises come true

(insert really gnarly lead solo here. approx 10 minutes of ear splitting slides and bends and reverb)

let that eat at your brain for a few minutes. then crumble the paper and shoot for the hoop!
Phip
hmmm i kinda like that.....forget it! i'm keeping it! LOL
Crunch  
19 Aug 2009 19:44 | Quote
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It sounds like Rage Against the Machine because "Voice of the Voiceless" is a song off of their "The Battle of Los Angeles" album. In that case, as well as many other, the "voice of the voiceless" is Mumia Abu-Jamal.
J05H  
19 Aug 2009 22:08 | Quote
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oh
METALFAN  
12 Sep 2009 22:47 | Quote
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what is the theme of this song? when i write a song i usually think about the theme first and it seems you write your songs that way as well so before i add what i think should go next what is the theme here?
patleh  
12 Sep 2009 22:51 | Quote
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WILD CARD ****ES!~!~!~!
J05H  
13 Sep 2009 11:51 | Quote
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a guy who kills everyone cuz the world is a disgrace


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