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patleh  
8 Jun 2009 22:34 | Quote
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Cmaj
talking to the mirror all alone
Gmin
trying to make what was said unknown
Gmaj
Emaj

Cmin
Driving home in the rain
Gmaj
trying to find out "what's he sayin?"
Gmin
tell me when to stay and when to go
E
s maybe i'll know--
Cmin
do you want me to stay
Gmin
or to leave
Gmaj
what do you want me to say

Emin
do you want me to plead?






idk i;m still working on it but its a start i guess.

BodomBeachTerror  
8 Jun 2009 22:43 | Quote
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pretty good dude
Heather  
9 Jun 2009 08:16 | Quote
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Well I think it's a brilliant start. Really like the lyrics and your chords, they all seem to fit well to me.
JustJeff  
9 Jun 2009 10:04 | Quote
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I find if you resolve to the Cmin instead of the Emin, it sounds a little more pulled together.

Though if you are looking for that dissonant ending... the Emin works :-P
patleh  
9 Jun 2009 10:49 | Quote
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ah, that does sound pretty good, i guess i'll just keep messing around with it.
soy.el.che  
10 Jun 2009 08:02 | Quote
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like it


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