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old poem thing i wrote

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BodomBeachTerror  
9 Jan 2009 02:16 | Quote
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When the battle is done, and all are dead but one,
Only then you can take prisoners,
and make him pick up all his fallen friends and sons.

Then lock him in a dungeon, starve him to death,
make him eat his very own flesh,
Only when he's gnawing on his bones,
You may hit him with stones.

When his skin starts to rot, and his spine in a knot
Then, and only then, may you send him back home
ride to his land 7 days later.... and do it again.

i was bored so i randomly decided to post this, which i wrote over a year ago when i was bored
jbalreira  
9 Jan 2009 09:59 | Quote
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Nice poem Bodom.
Perfect for a heavy metal song, eheh.
YinYang  
26 Jan 2009 20:50 | Quote
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Sounds so true...
RelaxedDude  
26 Jan 2009 21:24 | Quote
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Nice dude, kinda heavy for me

I dont want to hijack your thread, but heres a poem I wrote cause making a new thread would be pointless

I stand here, you there
Long to embrace each others touch
When society draws us apart
We strive to be together

Haha, I love the juxtaposition of my love poem after your poem
soy.el.che  
26 Jan 2009 21:28 | Quote
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good one, good rythm
BodomBeachTerror  
29 Jan 2009 01:23 | Quote
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this is like one of the first things ive ever written
guitarmastergod  
29 Jan 2009 23:12 | Quote
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lol, its quite br00tal like cannibal corpse or something lol
BodomBeachTerror  
30 Jan 2009 11:33 | Quote
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lol yeah, its too brutal for my taste even. thus im not gonna use it for a song lol
patleh  
30 Jan 2009 14:45 | Quote
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i enjoyed it. it all linked very well.


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