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Telecrater's New Song - Insomnia

Songwriting
telecrater  
26 Dec 2008 11:42 | Quote
Joined: 13 Jan 2008
United States
Lessons: 8
Karma: 13
I've been trying to go through and Re-wright ing and recording some old songs i wrote years ago. This is one. This one is something like 10 years old or so, at least when i first started on it. Damn I feel old....

It's far form being complete. I've got a lot of tweaking and mixing to do but I have not posted a song in a long time.

Y'all can view Lyrics and download the song if you want.

Telecraters Purevolume account
Empirism  
26 Dec 2008 14:20 | Quote
Joined: 23 Jun 2008
Finland
Lessons: 4
Karma: 35
I dont know, but somehow it got grin on my face! Nice job. Sound balance was perfect, every instrument can be heard nicely and smooth.

Very relaxed.

Cheers!
Empirism
JazzMaverick  
27 Dec 2008 11:22 | Quote
Joined: 28 Aug 2008
United Kingdom
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Yeah I'm liking this track. Well edited from what I'm hearing. It's quite a nice song, something I'd be listening to on the radio. Keep it up :D
telecrater  
31 Dec 2008 06:59 | Quote
Joined: 13 Jan 2008
United States
Lessons: 8
Karma: 13
Hey y'all I've posted a couple new songs to my pure volume account. I would love some feed back.

Check the link up under the original post

thanks
Phip  
31 Dec 2008 07:47 | Quote
Joined: 23 Dec 2007
United States
Lessons: 1
Karma: 45
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Hey Telecrater,
I think my fav is "I set the sun". love the intro and solo. good clean playing, and recording! can you post the lyics to "I set the sun"? thanks,
Phip
telecrater  
31 Dec 2008 15:24 | Quote
Joined: 13 Jan 2008
United States
Lessons: 8
Karma: 13
If you go to the site there is a lyric's button but I'll repost for you here. I've got a third verse I'm in progress about caylee and that whole businees but it's been slow. (this is only the 5th 3rd vers for this song i just can't seem to finish it)

Anyway's I'm glad you like it.

A shot gun blast on the edge of town
The echoing shot is a lonely sound
for fourteen years he said I do
She never would have though her days were through
A second shot pierced through the chilly air
as blood dripped down a broken stair
No one knew what set him off
but two lye dead in that rural loft

I set the sun
the moon light come shining
I can't see the
the sunlight is blinding
with bloody hands I find liberty
but I can't hear
the silence is deafening
I set the sun
I set the sun

A mother cried help but no one could hear
it was a car jacking with children tears
the man was black so she told the cops
but the truth lye buried down at the docks
she's been so sick of the kiddie cries
her only escape well they had to die
She drove to the lake the car rolled in
and didn't look back until the guilt set in
Phip  
31 Dec 2008 17:53 | Quote
Joined: 23 Dec 2007
United States
Lessons: 1
Karma: 45
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Yeah, that's what I'm talkin bout! terrific lyrics. Really well done! Thanks for posting. I couldn't make out some of the lyrics and i liked the song well enough to ask. Excellent.
Phip
Guitarslinger124  
31 Dec 2008 20:42 | Quote
Joined: 25 Jul 2007
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good song man! hope to hear more in the future.
Heather  
1 Jan 2009 14:17 | Quote
Joined: 21 Aug 2008
United Kingdom
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Great song, Telecrater! I love the lyrics and the track. That's some very nice work, it's people like you I look up to.
telecrater  
9 Jan 2009 09:48 | Quote
Joined: 13 Jan 2008
United States
Lessons: 8
Karma: 13
I just wrote the last verse to "Set the Sun" and wanted to get some input on it. It seems a little out of order right now but I just wrote it 5 minutes ago...

I think you can figure out that it's about the girl in florday who's been missing for a while.

They found Caylee a mile from home
in a carry on bag filled with bones
Mom didn't mind her baby was gone
just grabbed another long neck as nothing is wrong
the cops have been prowling for a month or more
sounds like a story I've heard before
the sweet little girl didn't have a chance
stuck between a rock and rotten circumstance

Let me know what you think i'm going to try and record it this afternoon. maybe i may need more practice with it first.
Phip  
9 Jan 2009 10:03 | Quote
Joined: 23 Dec 2007
United States
Lessons: 1
Karma: 45
Moderator
@ tele,
telecrater says:
just grabbed another long neck as nothing is wrong

just a thought on this line
grabbed another long neck as if nothin' was wrong
try it,

Can't wait to hear the recording,
Phip
soy.el.che  
9 Jan 2009 10:58 | Quote
Joined: way back
Mexico
Lessons: 1
Karma: 9
your songs rock. its fun, i like your style, its fun, you should sen the demo to a record company..
oh.. and very good lyrics by the way


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