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Little Kamakazee Boy (Now avalable on youtube)

Songwriting
patleh  
13 Dec 2008 20:38 | Quote
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i am sorry if my voice is not what you had expected.











Little Kamakazee boy
In your zero arow toy
Emporor says we fly today
Battle ships are in the bay


No hyrohito no,no,no
No hyrohito no,no,no


Solo(crapy)


Reapeat Above.



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foogered  
13 Dec 2008 21:16 | Quote
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Pretty clever lyrics, albeit a little dark for my taste, nice job though. Sounds like the kind of song the Dead Kennedy's might play if they were around for World War 2.
patleh  
13 Dec 2008 21:26 | Quote
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I must admit i did not write all of this. My dad's bestfriend wrote parts of this, sadly he died not to long ago.

So i decided to finish them.
soy.el.che  
17 Dec 2008 16:48 | Quote
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lol.. good
EMB5490  
17 Dec 2008 16:57 | Quote
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looks like ur holding the guitar wrong...the headstock shouldnt be facing up but should be somewhat horizontal to the ground
Ozzfan486  
17 Dec 2008 17:25 | Quote
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I like it. It'd sound better with a complete band [duh]. But yeah I like it.
Phip  
17 Dec 2008 17:42 | Quote
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@ Patleh,
I also like the lyrics (which are yours and which are your dad's friend's?) I'd like to see you expand on them instead of repeating. As far as the solo goes it would be cool to use an electric guitar with a lot of feedback and effects to create the sounds of battle like divebombers and explosions. (don't know if you have an electric or the experience). Now that the war is long over and your dad's friend and sooooo many vets have passed on it would be interesting if the song ended on a long whimsicle sad sustained note. Just some thoughts.
Phip
BodomBeachTerror  
17 Dec 2008 17:42 | Quote
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a like the lyrics, i couldnt understand a word you sang tho. i agree with emb, it looks like ur holding it wrong
EMB5490  
17 Dec 2008 17:45 | Quote
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the guitar sounds like a ukelelaye...
patleh  
17 Dec 2008 18:26 | Quote
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a lot of people tell me i hold it wrong =[. but when my father started teaching me to play guitar, i guess he never corrected me and it's now second nature to hold it like that.



also i'm making an electric version(hopefully tonight or soon) but my chord is broken, getting a new one tonight hopefully.
EMB5490  
17 Dec 2008 18:33 | Quote
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how long have u been playing? you should really correct that.
patleh  
17 Dec 2008 19:02 | Quote
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6 years. and i don't see much of a point, because i can play fine like that.
JazzMaverick  
18 Dec 2008 10:48 | Quote
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It doesn't matter how he holds the guitar, as long as he can play it. The point in a guitar is to play it, not to be judged over the image.

What strings are you using? They sound like the plastic ones. No offence but you need to keep practicing. Mainly with your timing.

Keep it up though.
patleh  
18 Dec 2008 14:39 | Quote
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none taken and fully agreed.
EMB5490  
18 Dec 2008 15:46 | Quote
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well im not saying image, it effects your playing if you play like that, chords especiall bar chords are hard if you hold it like that.


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