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The Grey door.(not emo)

Songwriting
patleh  
9 Dec 2008 17:50 | Quote
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Tell me if this sounds emo cuz its not supposed to be.


THe grey door protects me from the lighting
with it's free, three dee, paired hinges
it protects me from all other's fighting
It makes me feel special, its makes me safe
i know it's quite essential, its my faith
With it's wood chipped cheap grey paint
sometimes ill just hide inside of it all day
when i'm all locked up in it i'm my own saint
You should come inside too, It's got room
Before you come in use the lue, and bring a tomb
it's my escape to a paradise, and it is raining
THere, pigs fly, chimps talk, and birds swim
Wipe your feet to keep the carpet from staining
THere's a great big mountain, and a brisk beach
there's a majestic fountain, where wisemen teach


Chorus:
I'm hiding behind my grey door
im protected by it's grey walls
Eventually ill fall through the floor
when time comes when mother calls
Ozzfan486  
9 Dec 2008 18:22 | Quote
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Awsome rhymage Pat. You'd make a pretty good frontman dude.
soy.el.che  
9 Dec 2008 18:48 | Quote
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yep, maybe a bit emo, but much depends on the melody, it wont sound emo with a non soundin emo sound...
anyway, when u write lyrics, how do you think of them, as rimes, or as a melody already?
Ozzfan486  
9 Dec 2008 18:49 | Quote
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Yeeeeeaaaaahhh???????? You got washed up singers writin' yer werds boy!?
patleh  
9 Dec 2008 18:49 | Quote
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first i think of melodies i'd like to do.(in my head or sometimes in class.) then i think of the rymes and it sort of fits together like a puzzle. but its tough to keep it on subject to the song that way sometimes.



Oh and OZZFAN i really liked your song call to arms. i added you on myspace
Ozzfan486  
9 Dec 2008 18:53 | Quote
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Cool man.
blackholesun  
9 Dec 2008 19:20 | Quote
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Not emo in the slightest! They look good.
Ozzfan486  
9 Dec 2008 19:28 | Quote
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Yeah, I agree with BHS, they don't really sound emo at all to me.
patleh  
9 Dec 2008 19:47 | Quote
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i'm suprised i thought all the emo haters would pounce on me.
Ozzfan486  
9 Dec 2008 19:56 | Quote
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You're an exception. lol. j/k.
BodomBeachTerror  
9 Dec 2008 22:19 | Quote
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KILL THE EMOS!!!

jk. doesnt sound emo to me. nor do i hate emos
JazzMaverick  
9 Dec 2008 23:42 | Quote
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emo would mean you're talking about cutting yourself and your girl breaking up with you. This isn't emo.

Good lyrics though there are some spelling errors: '3D' and 'loo' is how they should be spelt.

The part where you're talking about a tomb feels like you put it there only because you ran out of rhyme. Other than that, it's pretty good.
TheAmericanBrit  
15 Dec 2008 16:37 | Quote
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Sounds pretty emo to me, man.

Emo is not just "dear diary....mood? apathetic..." kind of crap. Emo is more of a state of mind.
Heather  
17 Dec 2008 07:55 | Quote
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It sounds nothing like emo, I think it sounds happy and determinedto simply have the peace of the good things in life. I love the scheme as well, you're one of the best writers I've ever met.
TheAmericanBrit  
17 Dec 2008 14:25 | Quote
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Define emo.
BodomBeachTerror  
17 Dec 2008 14:30 | Quote
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JazzMaverick says:
emo would mean you're talking about cutting yourself and your girl breaking up with you. This isn't emo.


^emo^

emo is depressed cuz u want to be, emo is being upset just so you can write songs about it. emo is foolishness. there are ppl who are depressed enough to cut themselves, but emos do it for the sake of it
JazzMaverick  
17 Dec 2008 15:46 | Quote
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Time for the EMO SONG

Heather  
17 Dec 2008 16:12 | Quote
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Hmmm, emo education. Well, I was never expecting that.
Gee, this site teaches everything!
Although, I have to say, I've a theory that 'emos' are just chavs. They just don't like to admit it so they create a younger just as stupid label and only wear stripy cloths, listen to 'emo' music and cut them selves. That's about all those I know, they noticed they were just turning into a common chav and panicked! Seriously, whenever I ask those guys "What's the difference between how you and the chavs you hate so much and used to be act?" they reply (not a swear, but it's a word I hate)"*******, it's obvious, I have no tracksuit, I cut myself and hate RMB." Then I point out they liked it, then they reply "Shut up you ****." Well, correct me if I'm wrong, but ALL of them have said that and similar to me!

@patleh, I guess it's someone's point of view,there are always many groups of people who think a song has a diferent touch just because of the lyrics. Many of us disagree that it's emo, but just as many will think it just is emo. Don't let the fact that some see it that way pull you back, it's just th way we are. It's not found by me or other opinions a like as emo so jus accept it isn't by that and go a head if you really like it.
TheAmericanBrit  
17 Dec 2008 18:56 | Quote
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BodomBeachTerror says:
emo is depressed cuz u want to be, emo is being upset just so you can write songs about it. emo is foolishness. there are ppl who are depressed enough to cut themselves, but emos do it for the sake of it


That's Emof*g, not Emo.
BodomBeachTerror  
17 Dec 2008 18:59 | Quote
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than emo is just a taunting way to say depressed


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