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BodomBeachTerror  
20 Nov 2008 01:19 | Quote
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a little poem i wrote because i was bored!

"I feel so happy,
I'm beside myself with Joy
I guess I'm Schizophrenic,
I'm feeling kind of Eisoptrophobic
maybe not so Euphoric.
Insomniac now,
Somniphobia settling in.
Selenophobia is coming soon.
Staring at me, The man on the moon
So old, so wizened.
Becoming Gerontophobic,
Then Gerascophobic,
Thanatophobia comes next.
Stygiophobia closes in.
Fear of not being good enough,
Stygiophobia enters my mind.
Then The End."
BodomBeachTerror  
20 Nov 2008 23:08 | Quote
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nothing? no comments? no questions?

*watches tumbleweed go by*
TheAmericanBrit  
20 Nov 2008 23:33 | Quote
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*joins tumbleweed in going by*
BodomBeachTerror  
21 Nov 2008 00:07 | Quote
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lol nice. too many big words?
TheAmericanBrit  
21 Nov 2008 01:19 | Quote
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Yeah, I can't do too many big wurds and surch. I like normal words like "cat", and "ball".
JazzMaverick  
21 Nov 2008 01:49 | Quote
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I don't think Schizophrenic is the word you're looking for. They imagine things that aren't there, not just being happy. Some are completely paranoid and miserable.

The way I'm reading it though; I can hear Slipknot singing this.
TheAmericanBrit  
21 Nov 2008 02:34 | Quote
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My dad was Schizophrenic. Man, I never knew WHO was coming to dinner.
telecrater  
21 Nov 2008 10:01 | Quote
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I think it would work well for a fast high gain metal song, maybe heavy rock but your going for a folk or country song you my want to re-write it.
BodomBeachTerror  
21 Nov 2008 10:41 | Quote
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schizophrenics are people who have split personalities, or something similar. so when he says "Im beside myself with joy" he comes to the conclusion that he is schizo.

yea, i was just writing for the sake of it, no real tune in my head.
telecrater  
21 Nov 2008 11:15 | Quote
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ummm...... there is a difference between Schizophria and split personality disorder.

Wikipedia on Schizophrenia

"Despite its etymology, schizophrenia is not the same as dissociative identity disorder, previously known as multiple personality disorder or split personality; in popular culture the two are often confused."

Dissociative Identity Disorder (DID)

I think what your looking for is Dissociative Identity Disorder.

Use Wikipedia, there is some BS in there but it's a good staring point when your writing something like this. It's important to have your facts stright otherwise you'll look ignorant.

But ...

"I guess I'm Schizophrenic" sounds better than "I guess I've got Dissociative Identity Disorder"

BodomBeachTerror  
21 Nov 2008 11:19 | Quote
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oh, my bad.
Ozzfan486  
21 Nov 2008 17:29 | Quote
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@ BBT - I like it. But theres way too much "phobias" to be normal. If sung or rhymed in the voice of a phsycopath it would sound pretty cool though I'd say.
BodomBeachTerror  
21 Nov 2008 18:56 | Quote
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yeah, that was entirely the point lol

if i ever put this into a song i maybe will make it spoken


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