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Ozzfan486  
22 Oct 2008 20:33 | Quote
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Why?
Why do you talk to me when you hate me? Why do you talk to me when you know I hat you too? Why do you stand by my side just to stab me in the back? Who shut off the lights? Who turned my sight black? Why won't you explain to me why the hell you even care? You come and insult me but I just don't give a ***. All you do is repulse mother-f**ker, c'mon lets fight! So why do ya run your mouth when you know I can plow you over? I'll leave lying all alone like the snake that got ran over!
(GUITAR PART)
SPOKEN - You always wanna start a fight, you get everyone around to bite!

SANG - All to satisfyyyyy your *ing needs!!! Why are such a selfish **. To you no-thing else matters but your self!!!
So why do ya talk ta me when you hate me?.....Why do you talk to me when you know I hate you too..............


A bit more edgy and grim I know, but its about something that was going on with someone I know, and it was just from the heart so I put it to song.
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Ozzfan486  
22 Oct 2008 20:37 | Quote
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I don't give a s - h- i - t.

AND

Such a selfish b - a - s - t - a - r - d

So that you don't misenterperate the song I thought I'd let ya know.
TheAmericanBrit  
22 Oct 2008 20:38 | Quote
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telecrater  
22 Oct 2008 20:39 | Quote
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yeah i think i have to agree with skold. I just don't get it or see your vision of the song.

Try rewriting it and keep working on it.
GRX40  
22 Oct 2008 20:42 | Quote
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I dunno, it seems kind of rough ATM. There doesn't seem to be much... structure, at least what you have shown us. But you may have it all figured out in your head, I dunno.

But I can answer your question. They talk to you because they know it pisses you off, which they enjoy seeing since they hate you. :-/
Ozzfan486  
22 Oct 2008 20:42 | Quote
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You'd have to know what happened to understand it really. I thought of it something like "Get In The Ring" by G 'N R. You can tell I changed the first line from that song too. Try picturing a situation were you have a situation were your best friend turns on you and tries to manipulate you and those close to you.
Ozzfan486  
22 Oct 2008 20:45 | Quote
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GRX40 says:
I dunno, it seems kind of rough ATM. There doesn't seem to be much... structure, at least what you have shown us. But you may have it all figured out in your head, I dunno.

But I can answer your question. They talk to you because they know it pisses you off, which they enjoy seeing since they hate you. :-/


Yeah I know all about that, I like to try and study others' personalities as much as possible, and yes, I do have it fugured out in my head, I even have the music for it, hell I made it all yesterday lol.
TheAmericanBrit  
22 Oct 2008 20:46 | Quote
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It's hard to understand what you're writing about, I just don't really get IT.
Ozzfan486  
22 Oct 2008 20:47 | Quote
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Try picturing a situation were you have a situation were your best friend turns on you and tries to manipulate you and those close to you.
TheAmericanBrit  
22 Oct 2008 20:48 | Quote
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ROR.
Ozzfan486  
22 Oct 2008 20:50 | Quote
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Thats a new one. It means?
TheAmericanBrit  
22 Oct 2008 20:53 | Quote
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The Asian version of LOL.

ROR - Raff Out Roud.
Ozzfan486  
22 Oct 2008 20:55 | Quote
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WTF dude?

Good one though lol.
soy.el.che  
22 Oct 2008 20:56 | Quote
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i dunno, but i like lyrics when they are not specific and u can put them in many situations, i like it, you should get a tool-sound for that song (tool is a band just in case u didnt knew). as i wrote up there, i like those lyrics mostly because of that reason.
ror. thats hilarious
Ozzfan486  
22 Oct 2008 20:59 | Quote
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Thanks dude. I don't know how to get a tool sound out of it though i don't have too great of equipment, I already have chords to it though, it more of an acoustic fast paced menace kinda idk. ror.
JoeDalton  
23 Oct 2008 02:38 | Quote
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Not my personal taste, but we don't hear the guitar part so we can't say much about it.

Also, ROR was perfectly executed, a setup and a punchline, my hat is off to you kind sir.
Heather  
23 Oct 2008 14:27 | Quote
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Oh, I thought you were yelling at us there!Okay then, now I'm calming down! :)

I'm not really into aggresive songs that swear alot personally, it just makes me angry, dark and crazy. I actually went through a random depression stage when I was 14 because of it so I just keep away now.
Ozzfan486  
23 Oct 2008 14:46 | Quote
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I know its not going to be everyone's cup of tea but its something a like, and to heather, when I play the song not much all dark except the lyrics, I tried to make it one of those hidden things so will make one think when listening to it. I like it though.
soy.el.che  
25 Oct 2008 17:14 | Quote
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heather.... me 2. ive had very dpressive stages of my life the 2 last times i moved from town... at 13 and 14... i hardly ever hear 2 depressive songs. but every once in a while i take my dose of depressive music ror

ozzyfan, i like ur concept...
u know? keep it up, till now, i like ur way of thinkin


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