Here's a really early demo of a new song

http://media.putfile.com/The-American-Brits---Tambourine-Waltz

I haven't finished the lyrics, so the song is instrumental at the moment.

i like it. i feel it is missing something and not just the lyrics. my only opinion is to make the stops more dramatic (with lyrics or something else) they just feel like "what now??" (in a boring way) not "what now" (in a what hell could be next way). that and in the end have the lyrics go over the solo not just end with it. That is what i recommend take it or leave it. it is what you want it to be in the end

and a side note why are you calling it tambourine waltz there is no tambourine (didn't heard it a lest) and it is not a waltz. unless the lyrics talk about it

The last line of the chorus says "If you don;t have a beat to walk, walk to the tambourine waltz".

My friend Rob would love you. You two should do a collaboration sometime.

Slightly out of time at places, but as you said; it's an early recording. Keep at it.

Oh, and one of the reason's it's called Tambourine Waltz is because it reminds me of the cover The Byrds did of Mr Tambourine Man.

@Skold,
Yeah, but you just gotta add some tambourine to it. Ah, or maybe more cowbell! I need more cowbell!
Phip

I've gotta a fever, and the only cure is COWBELL!

DINK! DINK! DINK! DINK!