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Here's a really early demo of a new song

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TheAmericanBrit  
2 Oct 2008 17:51 | Quote
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http://media.putfile.com/The-American-Brits---Tambourine-Waltz

I haven't finished the lyrics, so the song is instrumental at the moment.

RA  
2 Oct 2008 18:15 | Quote
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i like it. i feel it is missing something and not just the lyrics. my only opinion is to make the stops more dramatic (with lyrics or something else) they just feel like "what now??" (in a boring way) not "what now" (in a what hell could be next way). that and in the end have the lyrics go over the solo not just end with it. That is what i recommend take it or leave it. it is what you want it to be in the end

and a side note why are you calling it tambourine waltz there is no tambourine (didn't heard it a lest) and it is not a waltz. unless the lyrics talk about it
TheAmericanBrit  
2 Oct 2008 22:01 | Quote
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The last line of the chorus says "If you don;t have a beat to walk, walk to the tambourine waltz".
JazzMaverick  
3 Oct 2008 08:22 | Quote
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My friend Rob would love you. You two should do a collaboration sometime.

Slightly out of time at places, but as you said; it's an early recording. Keep at it.
TheAmericanBrit  
3 Oct 2008 16:47 | Quote
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Oh, and one of the reason's it's called Tambourine Waltz is because it reminds me of the cover The Byrds did of Mr Tambourine Man.
Phip  
3 Oct 2008 16:50 | Quote
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@Skold,
Yeah, but you just gotta add some tambourine to it. Ah, or maybe more cowbell! I need more cowbell!
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TheAmericanBrit  
3 Oct 2008 17:06 | Quote
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I've gotta a fever, and the only cure is COWBELL!

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