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First ever song

Songwriting
jcb3000  
23 Sep 2008 17:19 | Quote
Joined: 09 Jul 2008
United Kingdom
Karma: 4
right i have been on here for a few months and well havent really had anything to show for it so i thought id write a song :)

this being my first ever song, well lyrics, written it was sort of hard to get it going so i picked a moment which was very moving to me to write about, so here goes, enjoy:

sad but true,
its the lyric of life,
however much the truth hurts,
embracing those two words,
i'm sorry...

truth hurts,
its on everyones path,
but when will we cross it?

waiting, pleading,
stuck in a rut,
where does this slippery slope end?
in an pool of shredded dignity

truth hurts,
its on everyones path,
but when will we accept it?

denial is ugly,
god is the twisted character,
fate is the excuse
and i am the road to emptiness



thats about it really, bit short i know but hey critisism is encouraged so dont hold back, thanks :)
baudelaire  
23 Sep 2008 17:23 | Quote
Joined: 16 Aug 2008
Brazil
Karma: 2
write 2 a day and come back in one month with the best thing you have written.
jcb3000  
23 Sep 2008 17:25 | Quote
Joined: 09 Jul 2008
United Kingdom
Karma: 4
ill give it a go thanks, its a whole concept of music which is alien to me so yeh lets see what comes out of the cesspool of which is my brain


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