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warning: extremely sappy!!! lol

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BodomBeachTerror  
17 Sep 2008 11:24 | Quote
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All the stars on a moonless night are nowhere near as beautiful as your face
A sunset on a glass lake can't compare to the perfectness of your body
The mountains in the world cant match the ecstasy of your eyes
Cold water on parched lips cant touch the soothingness of your lips gently pressed against mine



i have no intention of using this in a song.. just thot i'd show u guys for some reason
Empirism  
17 Sep 2008 11:46 | Quote
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Maybe you cant wait, but I have all time in the world.
Just maybe you should wait, but I cant treat you like a doll.
On cover of this moonless night, I could show how I love.
Silence. Your lips should not talk, Close those eyes so I can feel your soul.
GRX40  
17 Sep 2008 18:11 | Quote
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I dunno...

Some of the metaphors don't make much sense to me. Like how could a sunset be like a body, or mountains like eyes? They don't really paint a picture of how the person looks (to me).

:-?
JazzMaverick  
17 Sep 2008 18:20 | Quote
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I don't think it's how the person looks, it's just the fact that it's beautiful (to him)
BodomBeachTerror  
17 Sep 2008 18:24 | Quote
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wut she said =p
GRX40  
17 Sep 2008 18:25 | Quote
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Fair enough. :)
Nightmare  
17 Sep 2008 19:29 | Quote
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what does sappy means?
JazzMaverick  
18 Sep 2008 01:06 | Quote
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could mean; cheesy, emotional, personal.
CTown  
18 Sep 2008 07:17 | Quote
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Cheesy, Overly romantic...

@BBT: Keep it around in your lyric collection. You never know if/when your music tastes will change.
How crazy would it be to back those lyrics w/ a trash song?
But why can you see stars on a moonless night? I don't get it, but good imagery.
BodomBeachTerror  
18 Sep 2008 10:45 | Quote
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looooool its supposed to be cloudless =p my bad

yeah it is really cheesy lol
JazzMaverick  
18 Sep 2008 11:11 | Quote
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@CTown

It's possible to see stars on a moonless night, it's amazing actually.

Basically all you see is stars, and no moon.
GRX40  
18 Sep 2008 15:54 | Quote
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^ Seeing stars on a moonless night would be fairly common I think, since the in one phase of a lunar cycle (which lasts 28 days or so), the moon is not visible, or barely visible, even if it's not cloudy.


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