What do you think of my rough draft (lyrics)?

I know, you're feeling down but
Don't you, worry now
I realize, things are tought and
You have, had enough

Stay strong, you've been all along
I'm here, if somethin' goes wrong

Every day, I'll be here
So don't you, have a fear

(Cause You Know---)
I got your back and you've got mine,
Even through the hardest times
And I can guarantee that
You can count on me
(And I can count on you---)

You knew, I was feeling down but
I didn't, worry then---
You realized, things were tough and
I have, had enough

You've kept me strong, oooh all along
You were there, when things went wrong
Every day, you were there
And you, always cared

[Bridge]
They get pleasure from our pain
They think they know it all
If we stick together
We can make them fall

(Cause You Know---)
I got your back and you've got mine,
Even through the hardest times
And I can guarantee that
You can count on me
(And I can count on you---)

I think it is kinda weak in some parts but I was writing it at 3 AM (just finished writing it and it's almost 4 AM)
I will edit it and stuff later but what do ya's think so far?
It is a personal/meaningful kind of song if you get what I mean.

Not the best, but I like 'em.

I think that is easy to arrange and rhymes are nicely done.
Thumbs up! Good lyrics imo.

It's a good start. Great choice of lyrics for the bridge.

Thank you guys!
Anyone else care to give their honest opinions?

It sucks. haha im just kidding. cool lyrics

Awesome

good job