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What do you think of my rough draft (lyrics)?

Songwriting
GuitarBoy666  
9 Jul 2008 01:51 | Quote
Joined: 20 Dec 2007
Canada
Karma: 2
I know, you're feeling down but
Don't you, worry now
I realize, things are tought and
You have, had enough

Stay strong, you've been all along
I'm here, if somethin' goes wrong

Every day, I'll be here
So don't you, have a fear

(Cause You Know---)
I got your back and you've got mine,
Even through the hardest times
And I can guarantee that
You can count on me
(And I can count on you---)

You knew, I was feeling down but
I didn't, worry then---
You realized, things were tough and
I have, had enough

You've kept me strong, oooh all along
You were there, when things went wrong
Every day, you were there
And you, always cared

[Bridge]
They get pleasure from our pain
They think they know it all
If we stick together
We can make them fall

(Cause You Know---)
I got your back and you've got mine,
Even through the hardest times
And I can guarantee that
You can count on me
(And I can count on you---)

I think it is kinda weak in some parts but I was writing it at 3 AM (just finished writing it and it's almost 4 AM)
I will edit it and stuff later but what do ya's think so far?
It is a personal/meaningful kind of song if you get what I mean.
Skold  
9 Jul 2008 02:12 | Quote
Joined: 14 Mar 2008
United States
Karma: 3
Not the best, but I like 'em.

Empirism  
9 Jul 2008 04:05 | Quote
Joined: 23 Jun 2008
Finland
Lessons: 4
Karma: 35
I think that is easy to arrange and rhymes are nicely done.
Thumbs up! Good lyrics imo.
foogered  
9 Jul 2008 06:59 | Quote
Joined: 30 Apr 2008
United States
Lessons: 2
Licks: 11
Karma: 9
It's a good start. Great choice of lyrics for the bridge.
GuitarBoy666  
9 Jul 2008 11:07 | Quote
Joined: 20 Dec 2007
Canada
Karma: 2
Thank you guys!
Anyone else care to give their honest opinions?
jasonmac  
9 Jul 2008 13:44 | Quote
Joined: 06 Jul 2008
Canada
Karma
It sucks. haha im just kidding. cool lyrics
jarhead666  
12 Jul 2008 18:24 | Quote
Joined: 01 Jun 2008
Canada
Karma
Awesome
telecrater  
12 Jul 2008 21:12 | Quote
Joined: 13 Jan 2008
United States
Lessons: 8
Karma: 13
good job


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