new transposer      circle of 5ths    wap

part of a song I'm writing

8 Jul 2008 19:42 | Quote
Joined: 07 Jul 2008
United States
Some words I've jotted over time. music is in Dmaj - kind of a light happy tone.

Verse 1

I remember times
When Id fall from my flight to the ground
I would call upon someone who wasnt around
And it seemed when Id land it would never make a sound
And I wondered if anyone out there could see me

Verse 2

Laying in the hands
Of the Earth as I begin to see
I am not the only one who has secrets to keep
As they fall I am surrounded by subtle relief
That I am not alone in this
Struggle - for comfort
8 Jul 2008 19:45 | Quote
Joined: 14 Feb 2008
United States
Lessons: 3
Licks: 2
Karma: 11
I like it, would like to hear it once you put music to it.
8 Jul 2008 19:47 | Quote
Joined: 07 Jul 2008
United States
thx les.
8 Jul 2008 19:55 | Quote
Joined: 07 Jul 2008
United States
I have some progressions I've been messing around with for the lyrics - actually I've been working on several other tunes at the moment, I need to jump back on these lyrics and finish!

8 Jul 2008 20:57 | Quote
Joined: 30 Apr 2008
United States
Lessons: 2
Licks: 11
Karma: 9
Keep 'em coming. It's nice to see lyrics with a kind of "upswing" feel.
8 Jul 2008 21:01 | Quote
Joined: 06 Jul 2008
Add some more lyrics and music i think it would be a good song
8 Jul 2008 21:08 | Quote
Joined: 20 Dec 2007
Karma: 2
I like it so far.
Sounds cool.
You should finish it then record it and put some guitar in it and I think it'd be cool.
8 Jul 2008 22:25 | Quote
Joined: 07 Jul 2008
United States
thx alot for the comments, its nice to get natural and mature critisism without the drama and idiocracy like some music forums, im sure you guys know what i mean. one in particular is, several years back i joined and was on the forums daily - couldnt get a word in without some idiot trying to talk crap hah.

Copyright © 2004-2017 All rights reserved.