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Here's a poem I wrote...

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Skold  
8 Jun 2008 06:31 | Quote
Joined: 14 Mar 2008
United States
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Give me alcohol, or give me death

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I'd like to sip on the supple bottle of happiness.
Maybe I'd find a reason worth living for at the bottom.
Wonder what I'm doing down at the water.
Can't really think straight, but I'm not sure I want to.
No one likes the happy, but that's just their hang up.
Maybe they've got a point.
Maybe I'm just too blind to see it.
I don't really like where I'm going, you see.
Then again, I don't really like where I'm at.
I'm doomed to a wasteful, friend-less existence.
So give me Alcohol, or give me death.
GuitarBoy666  
8 Jun 2008 08:49 | Quote
Joined: 20 Dec 2007
Canada
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BEER! BEER! BEER! BEER!

I think your poem has a good point, cause people try to "drink away the pain"
soy.el.che  
8 Jun 2008 09:44 | Quote
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Mexico
Lessons: 1
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cool.. ure a good writer
Skold  
8 Jun 2008 17:15 | Quote
Joined: 14 Mar 2008
United States
Karma: 3
Thanks for the feedback, fellers.
Crunch  
8 Jun 2008 22:13 | Quote
Joined: 31 Jul 2007
United States
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Give me a drink-it's what I like best.
Already had a few too many-I might confess.
But if you hand that drink to me-
Believe me it would help me see!
I guess it could make it worse.
Perhaps next we meet, you and I.
I will travel in a hearse-
and you'll find I didn't tell you a lie!
GuitarBoy666  
9 Jun 2008 04:49 | Quote
Joined: 20 Dec 2007
Canada
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@Crunch,
aha noice noice!
jamesrue  
16 Jun 2008 16:48 | Quote
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Hey Skold, pretty sweet poem, i might say. Sometimes poems that dont rhyme end up sounding long or boring, or aree hard to read with a smooth rhythm, but you really nailed it with that one! *****-5 stars mate
Skold  
16 Jun 2008 16:51 | Quote
Joined: 14 Mar 2008
United States
Karma: 3
Thanks, mate. You seem like the kind of guy who might like my tunes: myspace.com/americanbrits
jamesrue  
18 Jun 2008 08:44 | Quote
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i'll check it out now then
jamesrue  
18 Jun 2008 08:52 | Quote
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pretty awesome skold, you should put access to downloads :p I'd put those on my iPod, specially 3 O'clock in the morning, GASP and we're just not the same!
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