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GuitarBoy666  
30 May 2008 21:39 | Quote
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Okay so they're was this prom thing at my school tonight and I was SUPPOSED to go with a girl who I really really like, and she never showed up. Honestly it broke my heart. So OBVIOUSLY, what do I do? GO write a heavy metal song. I have a lyric here:

Your dead to me dead inside,
You lied to me I can't
LET THIS SLIDE

Any advice on what to do with it? That is gonna be a chorus.
I just kinda write down the first thing that comes to mind and that sound kinda good imo.

W/B you guys?
Help appreciated, thanks (:
Skold  
30 May 2008 21:45 | Quote
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Not really into it, but that's just me. I would try thinking on the bright side. I remember a song by Oasis called "Don't look back in anger". Basically, it speaks about a girl who missed her chance, and then she finally realizes it. Though it may have pissed off the writer/guy in the story, he's not gonna look back in anger. (Lyric: So sally can wait. She knows it's too late as she's walking on by. My soul slides away. But don't look back in anger...I heard you say).

Basically, think of it in different ways, and from different angles. Just say what you would as if she were right in front of you. The rest of the lyrics should start to flow on out.
GuitarBoy666  
30 May 2008 22:20 | Quote
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I think I actually heard that song somewhere before. it sounds familiar.
It's kinda a heavy metal lyric and that's what it's gonna be when it's finished so yeah.
Anyways that sounds like it might work. Esp. The part about being right in front of her
BodomBeachTerror  
30 May 2008 22:21 | Quote
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sounds like a song that would come off IOWA
GRX40  
30 May 2008 22:36 | Quote
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I agree with BodomBeachTerror, it sounds like it could be a Slipknot song. You could kind of growl the first two lines, then yell the last part.

I would add some more words for the chorus, but that is a solid start.
GuitarBoy666  
31 May 2008 08:25 | Quote
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I've actually been hearing something by breaking Benjamin when I wrote the lyric.
I am not quite sure what song but Unknown Soldier starts off "Border line, dead inside" But that doesn't quite match how mine sounds...
Phip  
31 May 2008 08:53 | Quote
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GuitarBoy666 says:

Your dead to me dead inside,
You lied to me I can't
LET THIS SLIDE


A million truths
can't wash away your Lie

And now the time has come
for YOU to cry


just some thoughts
Phip
soy.el.che  
31 May 2008 09:25 | Quote
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phip... what happened to you.. can u hate??lol
gb.. dont give up
GuitarBoy666 says:
Your dead to me
dead inside,
You lied to me I can't
LET THIS SLIDE


ive gotta run
ive gotta close my eyes
theres mililions of fishes
out on the wild
but that doesnt make me
feel better at all
GuitarBoy666  
31 May 2008 10:34 | Quote
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Phip I like it. Esp. the 3rd & 4th lines.
Soy I like the first & last two lines of that.
I got something to work with now.
Skold  
31 May 2008 10:44 | Quote
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you hurt me then, so I walk and say "You're gonna be the one who fades away".


There you go, GB.
telecrater  
31 May 2008 18:19 | Quote
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as i stab you with my guitar
BodomBeachTerror  
31 May 2008 18:20 | Quote
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haha
GuitarBoy666  
31 May 2008 18:33 | Quote
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Lol tele, nice one xD
Skold  
31 May 2008 19:26 | Quote
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lol, that would be an option for a metal player, tele.
Tilikidis  
1 Jun 2008 21:02 | Quote
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dude youre fucking 12 get over it
GuitarBoy666  
1 Jun 2008 21:06 | Quote
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Lol someone has no emotion :P
ThePusher  
1 Jun 2008 21:07 | Quote
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Dude I was the guy at the Gr7 grad that had no date and had no one who even pitied me enough to dance with me so you know what I did, I went and got rreeaallyy fuckin baked and wrote something that was a total Tenacious D and fucked if I remember how it goes but my advice don't write metal if a girl ditches you instead have one of your friends who happens to be a chick pretend to be your girlfriend and make sure she acts slutty then the other girls want what you cant have instinct will kick in and then she'll end up like totally going tup to you and slipping her toungue down your throat it always works for me
BodomBeachTerror  
1 Jun 2008 21:15 | Quote
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@ pusher: ...

lol metal is built on hate =p
Cata34  
1 Jun 2008 21:52 | Quote
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Tilikidis says:
dude youre fucking 12 get over it

I don't recall him saying he was cutting himself over it or anything of the sort... just writing a song. Chill out theirs no need to be hostile.
Doz  
1 Jun 2008 22:30 | Quote
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Yeah, going to have to agree wih Cata. And disagree with BBT.
BodomBeachTerror  
1 Jun 2008 22:33 | Quote
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lol i disagree w/ me too =p
GuitarBoy666  
2 Jun 2008 10:41 | Quote
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@Pusher,
Nice. Aha xD

@BBT/Doz,
Metal is not built on hate. A lot of metal that I have is actually very emotional and has a lot of love in it. Some metal is hateful, like maybe... Hate me by Five Finger Death Punch. But then again, The Bleeding, by the same band, is apparently supposed to be a love song. The older metal music had much more emotion and love though. But not necessarily thrash and death metal. More like the Hair Metal kind.

@Cata,
No I am not cutting myself, I never have and I never will.
Doz  
2 Jun 2008 12:03 | Quote
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GB: I was disagreeing with BBT, meaning I think the same as you.
GuitarBoy666  
2 Jun 2008 12:34 | Quote
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Yeah I know aha.
I put yer name there to cause you disagree. I guess I was kinda adding to what you said/agreeing with you.

I shoulda just put BBT there.
Cata34  
2 Jun 2008 19:10 | Quote
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GuitarBoy666 says:
@Cata,
No I am not cutting myself, I never have and I never will.

I understand that. I didn't say you were either. I was using it as a hypothetical example to show Tilikidis he was overreacting.
GuitarBoy666  
2 Jun 2008 20:03 | Quote
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Yeah aha I know I'm just backing up what you said


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