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Almost finished with first original song - Looking for input

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JustJeff  
27 Apr 2008 11:45 | Quote
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Hey guys! Haven't been around here in a while.

I'm just trying to get some feedback on a new song I'm writing. I just got a rough recording done and although it's not perfect, it gets the idea across.

I would greatly appreciate it if you guys could sit down and give it a listen for 2-3 minutes and post back with some comments on what you liked and didn't like about it.

I'll be doing some fine tuning for the next week or so as my semester ends and maybe put a lot more time into writing music.

Thanks so much for the feedback

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6496627
EMB5490  
27 Apr 2008 12:10 | Quote
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no words? the guitar is fantastic, maybe make some of tht the intro and put in some words, and then make the rest the end solo. gr8 playing
JustJeff  
27 Apr 2008 13:31 | Quote
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Sorry, i forgot to mention that I am an instrumentalist. Not much with words :/

Thanks for the comments.
league  
27 Apr 2008 13:46 | Quote
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Good playing justjeff thats how I wanted to play when I picked up a guitar but I got taken by electric guitar. Very good cant stress it enough. XD
Phip  
27 Apr 2008 13:51 | Quote
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All in all i like it. sounds like maybe you lost your timing in a few spots but i understand it is the rough cut. maybe turn on the metronome to keep yourself true. good job.
telecrater  
27 Apr 2008 16:21 | Quote
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Nice job!!!

is it only 1 guitar? or did you over dub a 2nd guitar part?
JustJeff  
27 Apr 2008 16:35 | Quote
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It's just one guitar.
soy.el.che  
27 Apr 2008 17:18 | Quote
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wow... cool, keep it up
les_paul  
30 Apr 2008 08:47 | Quote
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Sounds great!
TheUndying  
30 Apr 2008 13:30 | Quote
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Prety dang good man
JustJeff  
23 May 2008 00:05 | Quote
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2 new songs posted... both instrumental acoustic

if you guys could give a listen and post some replies that would be awesome.

They are "Grounding" and "Don't Worry About Me"

www.soundclick.com/jeffcasarona
Skold  
23 May 2008 00:32 | Quote
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You could definitely make a living writing songs for TV, Films, etc.
JustJeff  
23 May 2008 00:48 | Quote
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Well, Thank you!

Though, I think I'll stick to my Computer Engineering Degree until I decide that music will be my choice of living ^.^
Skold  
23 May 2008 01:04 | Quote
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Good to hear that. It's probably best that you get that Degree first. That way, if you follow music and it doesn't work out, you have a back-up plan.
GuitarBoy666  
23 May 2008 05:00 | Quote
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Hey Jeff, haven't seen ya in a while, especially since I've been gone.
I really like yer song, it's kickass!
I'd like to play acoustic that well. All I can do is chords (:


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