Tell me what you think

This is the intro for a song Im working on,I dont have any good recording equipment or else Id upload an mp3 of it,well try and play it and tell me what you thik.


Its in the key of C.The rythm is just simple power chords,A/E-B/F-F/C,and G/D.
The modes ive used are A Aeolian,B Locrian,F Lydian and G Mixolydian.Keepin it simple.

Rythm-4/4--quarter notes

   A/E             B/F             F/C           G/D

e|---------------|--------------|--------------|--------------|

b|---------------|--------------|--------------|--------------|

g|---------------|--------------|--------------|--------------|

d|---------------|--------------|--------------|--------------|

a|---7--7--7--7--|--8--8--8--8--|--3--3--3--3--|--5--5--5--5--|

E|---5--5--5--5--|--7--7--7--7--|--1--1--1--1--|--3--3--3--3--|





   Lead-4/4

   A Aeolian-eighth notes         B Locrian-sixteenth notes 

e|--------------------------|------------19-------------------------|

b|--------------------------|----------20--20-22--------------------|

g|--------------------------|--------21------------------22-22-22-22|

d|-----------------17-------|------19---------------21-22-----------|

a|-----------20-19----17----|----20---------------20----------------|

E|--17-19-20-------------17-|--19---------------20------------------|





  F Lydian4/4-first 2 notes are    G Mixolydian-The first 2 notes are

  quarter notes and the restare    sixteenth notes and the rest are

  sixteenth notes.                 just eight notes

e|-----20------------------------|------------------------15-------|

b|----------18-24----22--------20|----------------15-17-18---------|

g|--22------------21--------22---|---------------------------------|

d|-------22--------------24------|--17---14-15-17------------------|

a|-------------------------------|---------------------------------|

E|-------------------------------|-----17--------------------------|

Ill put the rest up soon